Secrets [Prologue / ?]

[ladestiny92]

Title: Secrets
Author: ladestiny92
Rating: T (probably will go up in later chapters)
Pairing: Ohmiya, Sakuraiba
Warning: Ohmiya Mpreg
Summary: Ohno was feeling tired and kept throwing up lately. He later found out he was pregnant. Not knowing how the others, especially Nino would react, he kept his condition a secret from everyone else.

Prologue

“Ohno-san, I finally got your result,” Akiya-sensei, Ohno’s doctor, said. “There’s a reason for your tiredness, and why you throw up almost everyday.”

 

“I’ve been following the diet you gave me, so it’s not because of food, is it?” Ohno asked. He knew the other members complained that he is too thin and didn’t eat enough, but he really did eat properly. It’s just that the food won’t stay inside.

 

Akiya-sensei shook his head. “In fact, it is a more serious matter.” He looked seriously at Ohno. “I know there’s not yet a scientific explanation for this, but Ohno-san, you’re pregnant.”

 

Upon hearing the news, Ohno could feel sparks of happiness in his heart, but at the same time, he felt his world crashing. ‘What if the others think he’s a freak?’ he thought. ‘What if Nino think he’s weird? How would the world accept it?’

 

“Ohno-san,” the doctor said, snapping Ohno out of his thought. Ohno looked at the doctor. “You’re still in your first trimester, so it is better not to exhaust yourself. Don’t stress yourself too much.” Then, Akiya-sensei wrote some things on a piece of paper. “These are the things you need to take; vitamins, healthy food, and so forth.” Ohno nodded his head. “We’ll meet again next week to see how you’re doing.”

 

Akiya-sensei looked at Ohno, who was still in a dazed state. “There’s also another way out, of course,” he added in, “if you doesn’t want to go through with it.”

 

“Thank you, sensei,” Ohno said, bowing at the doctor as he stood up. “Let me think about this thoroughly first.” Before he left, he said, “Akiya-sensei, could you keep this a secret. If the tabloid finds out…”

 

“I understand, Ohno-san,” Akiya-sensei said.

 

For the last two weeks, Ohno had been feeling unwell; constantly throwing up, and feeling tired. Even though he ate according to the diet arranged for him, Ohno is still quite thin. The members of Arashi had been persuading him to see a doctor for some time now, but he always shrugged it off as an unimportant thing; making excuses like he’s too busy with paper works and such. But today, when they were practicing their dance steps, Ohno finally collapses. That was the last straw for Nino.

 

“Satoshi, you will see a doctor even if I have to drag you there myself,” was what Nino told him four days ago. That’s why he made an appointment with his doctor, and today was the day the results came out.

 

For the rest of the day, Ohno had been given a day off. He decided to return home. As soon as he reached his apartment, Ohno sat on his couch. His cell phone had been ringing a few times now, but he didn’t answer it. He knew it was Nino, curious to know what’s wrong with him. But he couldn’t tell anyone yet. He needed to clear his thought and accept the fact.

 

‘What will Nino think about this,’ Ohno wondered. Ohno knew, he knew, although Nino loves him as do Ohno, he knew that Nino is still not ready for this, not ready for this kind of commitment.

 

‘What if he ask me to abort the child?’ Ohno thought again. Unconsciously, Ohno’s hand went to his stomach. He shut his eyes. No, he can’t let that happen. No matter what, the baby has nothing to do with this. He didn’t know why, but he felt protective of the baby.

 

After hours of thinking, Ohno had made up his mind. He WILL keep the baby, and even if he has to keep this a secret from Nino, from the world, he will do it. Ohno loves Nino, and until the latter is ready, he will wait patiently; wait until it is the right time to tell him the truth.

Comments

[(Anonymous)]

No need to get snippy, now. And sorry, let me rephrase that: You need to be completely, completely fluent in English (or have an extremely good beta) to post stories of good quality. Language is about expression and the accuracy to express yourself. Storytelling is much of the same but with an attention to detail-- it's about showing the story, immersing the reader in the situation; a feat which is quite difficult for those who are not fluent. As you said, a lot of authors aren't fluent in English in this fandom-- so why does everyone feel they must adhere to it?

[jamiesteban.livejournal.com]

that's why we register at a free journal, where everyone could share and post their thoughts about a certain thing. We respect English that's why everyone's trying their best to make it understandable. Most authors write apologies about grammatical errors and we understand them.

Why not try to read more fics, lower your pride and attitude about English, so that you'll understand what we mean.

Why not ask the beta readers, too? So you'll get to know their opinion.

And if you still keep doing this, its better to leave the site completely and come back when you're more respectful and more humane.

Good day!

[(Anonymous)]

Most authors write apologies, sure, but they also tend to disregard constructive criticism and refuse to use betas.

And frankly, there is no reason to lower my pride and/or attitude about English. It's rather offensive to apply that there is. One should never be expected to lower standards to accomodate something which could easily be solved.

[jamiesteban.livejournal.com]

frankly, why not offer yourself?

[(Anonymous)]

Offer myself for what, pray tell?

[duoson.livejournal.com]

oh gawdd...who is this anonymous person? the most unreasonable person i've ever seen. mind you, the people in arashirabu are totally grand. and even if they want to voice out any grammar error, they do it nicely...and they help by showing where and how the writer can improve. i don't think you belong here cos if you do, you'll realize t

[hiyoshichii.livejournal.com]

oii ! be resonable ! not even a hag in the world would ask you to read if u don't want to ...... so if u don't like it don't read ...... the writer did wrote the warning, baka ...... (*to the writer* srry for writing rude words in the comment but i'm pissed )