Secrets [Prologue / ?]

[ladestiny92]

Title: Secrets
Author: ladestiny92
Rating: T (probably will go up in later chapters)
Pairing: Ohmiya, Sakuraiba
Warning: Ohmiya Mpreg
Summary: Ohno was feeling tired and kept throwing up lately. He later found out he was pregnant. Not knowing how the others, especially Nino would react, he kept his condition a secret from everyone else.

Prologue

“Ohno-san, I finally got your result,” Akiya-sensei, Ohno’s doctor, said. “There’s a reason for your tiredness, and why you throw up almost everyday.”

 

“I’ve been following the diet you gave me, so it’s not because of food, is it?” Ohno asked. He knew the other members complained that he is too thin and didn’t eat enough, but he really did eat properly. It’s just that the food won’t stay inside.

 

Akiya-sensei shook his head. “In fact, it is a more serious matter.” He looked seriously at Ohno. “I know there’s not yet a scientific explanation for this, but Ohno-san, you’re pregnant.”

 

Upon hearing the news, Ohno could feel sparks of happiness in his heart, but at the same time, he felt his world crashing. ‘What if the others think he’s a freak?’ he thought. ‘What if Nino think he’s weird? How would the world accept it?’

 

“Ohno-san,” the doctor said, snapping Ohno out of his thought. Ohno looked at the doctor. “You’re still in your first trimester, so it is better not to exhaust yourself. Don’t stress yourself too much.” Then, Akiya-sensei wrote some things on a piece of paper. “These are the things you need to take; vitamins, healthy food, and so forth.” Ohno nodded his head. “We’ll meet again next week to see how you’re doing.”

 

Akiya-sensei looked at Ohno, who was still in a dazed state. “There’s also another way out, of course,” he added in, “if you doesn’t want to go through with it.”

 

“Thank you, sensei,” Ohno said, bowing at the doctor as he stood up. “Let me think about this thoroughly first.” Before he left, he said, “Akiya-sensei, could you keep this a secret. If the tabloid finds out…”

 

“I understand, Ohno-san,” Akiya-sensei said.

 

For the last two weeks, Ohno had been feeling unwell; constantly throwing up, and feeling tired. Even though he ate according to the diet arranged for him, Ohno is still quite thin. The members of Arashi had been persuading him to see a doctor for some time now, but he always shrugged it off as an unimportant thing; making excuses like he’s too busy with paper works and such. But today, when they were practicing their dance steps, Ohno finally collapses. That was the last straw for Nino.

 

“Satoshi, you will see a doctor even if I have to drag you there myself,” was what Nino told him four days ago. That’s why he made an appointment with his doctor, and today was the day the results came out.

 

For the rest of the day, Ohno had been given a day off. He decided to return home. As soon as he reached his apartment, Ohno sat on his couch. His cell phone had been ringing a few times now, but he didn’t answer it. He knew it was Nino, curious to know what’s wrong with him. But he couldn’t tell anyone yet. He needed to clear his thought and accept the fact.

 

‘What will Nino think about this,’ Ohno wondered. Ohno knew, he knew, although Nino loves him as do Ohno, he knew that Nino is still not ready for this, not ready for this kind of commitment.

 

‘What if he ask me to abort the child?’ Ohno thought again. Unconsciously, Ohno’s hand went to his stomach. He shut his eyes. No, he can’t let that happen. No matter what, the baby has nothing to do with this. He didn’t know why, but he felt protective of the baby.

 

After hours of thinking, Ohno had made up his mind. He WILL keep the baby, and even if he has to keep this a secret from Nino, from the world, he will do it. Ohno loves Nino, and until the latter is ready, he will wait patiently; wait until it is the right time to tell him the truth.

Comments

[(Anonymous)]

This is the worst thing I've ever had the displeasure of reading. Do everyone a favor: the next time you want to write? Don't.

CUTE FIC!

[jamiesteban.livejournal.com]

to anonymous, I think writing is anyone's habit ne? it's a freedom to write especially when the person is inspired to do so. Sharing her thoughts about the story added to the kindness and sweetness of the person. This fic is actually cute and some Ohmiya fans would like the author to continue writing this fic. Don't be so fickle-minded. Btw, it's better to write your name for everyone to know you. If you find this fic disturbing, don't read it. You're making the author feel down.

This fic is CUTE and I want the author to CONTINUE updating this fic.

[ladestiny92.livejournal.com]

You know, I've been writing fanfictions for a long time, but I know I still make grammatical errors and such.
So, if you hate it please don't read.
If you still want to read, and hate it, why don't you tell me what you hate about it instead of just flaming me without giving any reasons.
When one of the authors in ff.net flamed me, at least they gave me reasons for hating my story and told me ways to improve myself, and they signed in their account.
So, at least, when you flame, please sign in.

Re: CUTE FIC!

[ladestiny92.livejournal.com]

Thanks for your support...^^,
I'm glad you like it...^_^
I don't mind the flame, but I want to at least know the anonymous name and why she hate it...^^,
You really think this is cute? Thanks^^
I'll try to update quickly, but with homeworks piling up, exams and my other unfinished fanfics, I don't know when I could update...^^,
Again, thank you for the sweet review...^^

[(Anonymous)]

It's not really the grammar that's the problem. It's the plot and the characterization. But maybe you should stick to writing in your native language? Just a suggestion.

And I don't have a LiveJournal account, sorry.

Re: CUTE FIC!

[jamiesteban.livejournal.com]

it's a cute fic.

writing an mpreg makes it unique, since it's very uncommon knowledge to put such in a boyxboy love story. ^^

hope that the person will write his/her name, ne? since putting a hate letter without signing is better to be seen at the trash. ^^

Oh, I know what struggle you're currently in since I'm also in that circle... ^^

hope you update soon, ne?

What's Oh-chan gonna do? hmmm...

[jamiesteban.livejournal.com]

i think it's better if you'll not just comment. if she's gonna write it in her native language, how will the other fans read and understand her point since the universal language is ENGLISH? She's trying her best so please if you don't have anything good to write, just don't comment.

BTW, you don't have to have an account to make everyone recognize you. State whatever you wanted to be called. It's a sign of respect even if you put flames.

[nattora.livejournal.com]

My attention was actually caught by two words - Ohno and pregnant. I totally agree with jamiesteban that this fic is unique. It's the first time I encounter with such a crazy idea! But I'm curious what will happen next, so I will wait for the updateXD. And I will check for your other fics=)

Gambare!

[(Anonymous)]

She (among others) would be better off writing in her native language for the fact that if you're not completely, completely fluent in English, your writing will always be subpar. With the amount of ESL fic writers (and readers), there are more than enough to constitute a fanbase or community. Her point would be better construed in her mother tongue because trust me, it does not translate well.

I am who I am, and I don't see how that's any of your business.

[ladestiny92.livejournal.com]

So that you know, my native language is Bahasa Malaysia...but I love writing in English.
If I keep writing, I know I will improve myself, so I won't let something like that stopping me.
Besides, if I know if I read more Arashi fanfics, and get more infos, I'll get the hang of it. This is just the second time I write Arashi fic so of course it is OOC.

[realm-of-ravenx.livejournal.com]

Please ignore Anonymous who obviously has no taste in good fanfiction.

I personally love this so far and hope you continue. I can't wait to see how things develop, I hope you don't keep me waiting for too long! I'm on the edge of seat already. ^_^

[arashic0804.livejournal.com]

well i think its unique..ohno pregnant..thats awesome...XDXD...just keep it up! ignore those ppl who dont knw how to critique but want to do it..XD GAMBARE!!

[ladestiny92.livejournal.com]

Thanks for the review...^^,
I'm glad you like it...^_^
At first, it felt kind of weird writing mpreg fics about characters who really do exist in..well, real life. lol^^
But after reading demonic crayons mpreg fic in arashirabu, I decided to try..lol^^,

[(Anonymous)]

No offense, but fanfiction is not exactly the best place to find out proper grammar or characterization, especially considering this fandom. I hate to sound elitist, but English is one of the most beautiful, expressive languages there is, and it's a shame to see it used improperly.

[ladestiny92.livejournal.com]

Of course, I will ignore anonymous..^_^
lol~ I'm glad you like it...^^
Well, next week, I have one week holiday because of Hari Raya, so after helping my mom to clean up the house, I'll use my time to write..lol
Of course, I need to study to because after holiday, there's exam...-.-'
Well, stay on your seat... I'll do my best to update super fast...^^,

[nattora.livejournal.com]

Oh, so there is another mpreg fic on arashirabu, should check=) I became curious of this topic=)

[jamiesteban.livejournal.com]

well, i think we are who we are too, ne? it's every OHMIYA fan's business to stick into this kind of situation. Not all are like YOU, so perfect and all.

We still understand her point, that's what matters most.

You don't have to be completely, completely fluent in English to be able to write and post stories in this journal.

And if keep on being a fickle-minded, better stay away from the site, where most authors are not completely, completely fluent in English. (I feel sad for you since I think you lack attention)

[ladestiny92.livejournal.com]

I know...and for your information, just based on my fanfiction, you can't just say I don't love English.
I do take English seriously. I'm not saying I'll use fanfiction as the only method to learn. I do learn at school. And, you know what, I just remembered a poem called If by Rudyard Kipling.
So, I will stop replying to you, and why don't you read that poem too. Probably you'll get some advice from there.

[ladestiny92.livejournal.com]

Arigatou, Shida-chan...(that's your name, right? sorry if I got it wrong)^^
I'm glad you like it...^^,
Yup, I'll ignore those people...lol
Especially after reading a poem I learned at school called If by Rudyard Kipling. It's really great with all the advices...^^,
Thanks again for the review..^^

[(Anonymous)]

No need to get snippy, now. And sorry, let me rephrase that: You need to be completely, completely fluent in English (or have an extremely good beta) to post stories of good quality. Language is about expression and the accuracy to express yourself. Storytelling is much of the same but with an attention to detail-- it's about showing the story, immersing the reader in the situation; a feat which is quite difficult for those who are not fluent. As you said, a lot of authors aren't fluent in English in this fandom-- so why does everyone feel they must adhere to it?

[(Anonymous)]

I'm not saying you don't love English. I'm sure you do. But maybe you should practice a bit more is all.

[jamiesteban.livejournal.com]

that's why we register at a free journal, where everyone could share and post their thoughts about a certain thing. We respect English that's why everyone's trying their best to make it understandable. Most authors write apologies about grammatical errors and we understand them.

Why not try to read more fics, lower your pride and attitude about English, so that you'll understand what we mean.

Why not ask the beta readers, too? So you'll get to know their opinion.

And if you still keep doing this, its better to leave the site completely and come back when you're more respectful and more humane.

Good day!

[(Anonymous)]

Most authors write apologies, sure, but they also tend to disregard constructive criticism and refuse to use betas.

And frankly, there is no reason to lower my pride and/or attitude about English. It's rather offensive to apply that there is. One should never be expected to lower standards to accomodate something which could easily be solved.

[jamiesteban.livejournal.com]

frankly, why not offer yourself?

[(Anonymous)]

Offer myself for what, pray tell?