[Drabble] Failure

[ladestiny92]

Title: Failure
Fandom: Hey! Say! JUMP
Author: Saida
Pairing: Hikato
Genre: Fail crack!
Word Count: 396 <-------- fails again! =w=
Summary: Hikaru made a come back! xDDD
Notes: JEN!!! HERE IT IS!!! XDDDD I FAILLSSSSS!!!!!! I hope this doesnt disappoint you though...xDDD IT ISH A TOTAL FAILURE!!! =W= OH! I'll post the multi-chap fic night your time..xDDD This is the...errr...third drabble in the Pick Up Line series...xDDD Pick up line drabbles: Hikaru's Attempt, Another Attempt...Will It Work?
Disclaimer: Don't you think I'll be more happier by now if I own them? xDDD

     Hikaru and Keito were walking side by side. It was silent between them. One minute. Two minutes. Three minutes. Four minutes. Five minutes. "What are you doing here?" Keito stopped walking, looking at Hikaru.

     "Walking to school with you, what else?" Hikaru grinned.

 

     "But we don't go to the same school," Keito said in a monotone.

 

     The cold morning breeze brought awkward silence. Keito still looks at Hikaru. Hikaru stared at Keito. One minute. Two minutes. Three minutes. Four minutes. Five minutes. "Awwwe, Keito, you're so cute!" He glomped Keito tightly. 

 

     "Air," Keito gasped. Hikaru let go of Keito, still grinning. "Are you crazy?!"

 

     "Probably," Hikaru chuckled. They continued walking. 

 

     It was silent again. 'Weird,' Keito thought. He never thought that walking with Hikaru can be this...silent. He took a peek at Hikaru. The older teen's eyes were focused to the ground, a wide grin on his face as he skipped.    

              

     Doki doki!

 

     Keito could feel his heart beating fast, his face became warm. 'He actually seems...nice.'

 

     "Keito?"

 

     "Y-Yeah?" Keito snapped out of his thought. His heart almost stopped beating when he saw how close Hikaru's face is from him.

 

     "Keito, I want to show you something," Hikaru said. Hikaru grinned even more wider. 

 

     'How wide can he grin actually?' Keito thought.

 

     "You see my friend over there?" Hikaru pointed at the school's gate. Keito's eyes followed the direction that Hikaru pointed. He saw the person waving at them sheepishly from afar.

 

     "Isn't that Ayukawa-kun?" Keito voiced out.

 

     "He wants to know if YOU think I'M cute?" 

 

     Keito clenched his fists. He could feel his vein twitched.

 

     'SLAP'

 

     "And I thought today you're not fooling around," Keito mumbled under his breath, quickening his pace.

 

     "Ohayou," Taiyou said when Keito passed him.

 

     "Ohayou," Keito retort. Taiyou winced. He knew things must not have worked well with Hikaru.

 

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     "You should have learn by now," Taiyou said, smacking Hikaru's shoulder lightly. 

 

     "What are you talking about?" Hikaru rubbed his cheek. There's evident of a red hand-print on his cheek.

 

     "Your previous failures?"

 

     Hikaru put his hand at his heart. "Ouch, that hurts," he said dramatically.

 

     Taiyou laughed. "Come on, we'll be late."

 

     "I PROMISE MY NEXT ATTEMPT WILL WORK FOR SURE!"

 

     Taiyou shook his head. 'I'll have to talk to Yabu about this.' 

 

     Hikaru jumped. "OKAMOTO KEITO! YOU WILL BE MINE!!!" 

Comments

[hibinoasami.livejournal.com]

anoo.. first ???

and gawd Hik-chan is such a baka !!! just tell him already !! (well at least he's not using cheesy lines XD)
and YES for u, Taiyou !! u must tell Yabucchi about this !!
arigatou for this ^^

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[chibilover14.livejournal.com]

Uwaaaaaaaaah~!! FOR ONCE I THOUGHT HIKARU WOULD BE SUCH A CUTE AND NICE BOYFRIEND TO KEITO. XDDDD WITHOUT THE CHEESINESS OF COURSE. XDDD EVEN KEITO THOUGHT SO, TOO! LOL

NICE IN ADDING IN TAIYOU! XDDDDDDD

O______________________O;;; WTF HIKARU. XDDDD THAT'S UTTERLY LAME AND DID KEITO REALLY HAVE TO SLAP HIKARU?! XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD VIOLENT KEITO I SPY! XDDD

"And I thought today you're not fooling around," Keito mumbled under his breath, quickening his pace.
I THOUGHT THE SAME THING TOO! XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

Yush, Taiyou should really talk to Yabu. xDDDDDDDD AND HIKARU ISH SUCH AN ADORKABLE IDIOT! BEING ALL DRAMATIC!!!

Thanks for posting so fast~! A SEQUEL! AND MEH ISH CONTENT FOR NOW! XDDD *waits patiently for the next sequel* xDDDDDDDDDD THIS DRABBLE WAS SERIOUSLY LOL

AND YOU NO FAIL! D< RAWRRRRRRRRR