Hi, I'm sorry I only got around to reading this now.
First and foremost, the story was all around adorable, (Ohmiya baby kyaaaaaa~~~) And I really, really hope that you will continue! (what will Nino do/say when he finds out? XD) Ohh, I'm excited! XD
You probably want this to be over and done by now, so I'm sorry for bringing it up, but I want to show my support for you.
Your English is very, very good as it is. I've read many works by non-native English speakers, and this was great! You expressed yourself wonderfully, and your ideas came through, as anyone with half a brain could see. Regardless of what anyone says to you, or about you, always remember that this is YOUR lj, and YOUR place to write whatever comes to you, in whatever language you speak, NOT a place where you should be afraid of writing, and sharing with people, just because of a few elitist b*tches.
However, I do have a problem with your fic. It's much, much to short. Why did you stop there? Whhhyyyyyyy? ;___; How long do I have to wait to read the rest. Ugh...waiting for chapter 1 is hard ;_____; (write quickly, please?)
*hugs, and sends you heaps chocolate and Ohmiya plushies*
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Date: 2008-09-26 06:24 pm (UTC)First and foremost, the story was all around adorable, (Ohmiya baby kyaaaaaa~~~) And I really, really hope that you will continue! (what will Nino do/say when he finds out? XD) Ohh, I'm excited! XD
You probably want this to be over and done by now, so I'm sorry for bringing it up, but I want to show my support for you.
Your English is very, very good as it is. I've read many works by non-native English speakers, and this was great! You expressed yourself wonderfully, and your ideas came through, as anyone with half a brain could see. Regardless of what anyone says to you, or about you, always remember that this is YOUR lj, and YOUR place to write whatever comes to you, in whatever language you speak, NOT a place where you should be afraid of writing, and sharing with people, just because of a few elitist b*tches.
However, I do have a problem with your fic. It's much, much to short. Why did you stop there? Whhhyyyyyyy? ;___; How long do I have to wait to read the rest. Ugh...waiting for chapter 1 is hard ;_____; (write quickly, please?)
*hugs, and sends you heaps chocolate and Ohmiya plushies*