Secrets [Prologue / ?]

[ladestiny92]

Title: Secrets
Author: ladestiny92
Rating: T (probably will go up in later chapters)
Pairing: Ohmiya, Sakuraiba
Warning: Ohmiya Mpreg
Summary: Ohno was feeling tired and kept throwing up lately. He later found out he was pregnant. Not knowing how the others, especially Nino would react, he kept his condition a secret from everyone else.

Prologue

“Ohno-san, I finally got your result,” Akiya-sensei, Ohno’s doctor, said. “There’s a reason for your tiredness, and why you throw up almost everyday.”

 

“I’ve been following the diet you gave me, so it’s not because of food, is it?” Ohno asked. He knew the other members complained that he is too thin and didn’t eat enough, but he really did eat properly. It’s just that the food won’t stay inside.

 

Akiya-sensei shook his head. “In fact, it is a more serious matter.” He looked seriously at Ohno. “I know there’s not yet a scientific explanation for this, but Ohno-san, you’re pregnant.”

 

Upon hearing the news, Ohno could feel sparks of happiness in his heart, but at the same time, he felt his world crashing. ‘What if the others think he’s a freak?’ he thought. ‘What if Nino think he’s weird? How would the world accept it?’

 

“Ohno-san,” the doctor said, snapping Ohno out of his thought. Ohno looked at the doctor. “You’re still in your first trimester, so it is better not to exhaust yourself. Don’t stress yourself too much.” Then, Akiya-sensei wrote some things on a piece of paper. “These are the things you need to take; vitamins, healthy food, and so forth.” Ohno nodded his head. “We’ll meet again next week to see how you’re doing.”

 

Akiya-sensei looked at Ohno, who was still in a dazed state. “There’s also another way out, of course,” he added in, “if you doesn’t want to go through with it.”

 

“Thank you, sensei,” Ohno said, bowing at the doctor as he stood up. “Let me think about this thoroughly first.” Before he left, he said, “Akiya-sensei, could you keep this a secret. If the tabloid finds out…”

 

“I understand, Ohno-san,” Akiya-sensei said.

 

For the last two weeks, Ohno had been feeling unwell; constantly throwing up, and feeling tired. Even though he ate according to the diet arranged for him, Ohno is still quite thin. The members of Arashi had been persuading him to see a doctor for some time now, but he always shrugged it off as an unimportant thing; making excuses like he’s too busy with paper works and such. But today, when they were practicing their dance steps, Ohno finally collapses. That was the last straw for Nino.

 

“Satoshi, you will see a doctor even if I have to drag you there myself,” was what Nino told him four days ago. That’s why he made an appointment with his doctor, and today was the day the results came out.

 

For the rest of the day, Ohno had been given a day off. He decided to return home. As soon as he reached his apartment, Ohno sat on his couch. His cell phone had been ringing a few times now, but he didn’t answer it. He knew it was Nino, curious to know what’s wrong with him. But he couldn’t tell anyone yet. He needed to clear his thought and accept the fact.

 

‘What will Nino think about this,’ Ohno wondered. Ohno knew, he knew, although Nino loves him as do Ohno, he knew that Nino is still not ready for this, not ready for this kind of commitment.

 

‘What if he ask me to abort the child?’ Ohno thought again. Unconsciously, Ohno’s hand went to his stomach. He shut his eyes. No, he can’t let that happen. No matter what, the baby has nothing to do with this. He didn’t know why, but he felt protective of the baby.

 

After hours of thinking, Ohno had made up his mind. He WILL keep the baby, and even if he has to keep this a secret from Nino, from the world, he will do it. Ohno loves Nino, and until the latter is ready, he will wait patiently; wait until it is the right time to tell him the truth.

Comments

[(Anonymous)]

This is the worst thing I've ever had the displeasure of reading. Do everyone a favor: the next time you want to write? Don't.

[ladestiny92.livejournal.com]

You know, I've been writing fanfictions for a long time, but I know I still make grammatical errors and such.
So, if you hate it please don't read.
If you still want to read, and hate it, why don't you tell me what you hate about it instead of just flaming me without giving any reasons.
When one of the authors in ff.net flamed me, at least they gave me reasons for hating my story and told me ways to improve myself, and they signed in their account.
So, at least, when you flame, please sign in.

CUTE FIC!

[jamiesteban.livejournal.com]

to anonymous, I think writing is anyone's habit ne? it's a freedom to write especially when the person is inspired to do so. Sharing her thoughts about the story added to the kindness and sweetness of the person. This fic is actually cute and some Ohmiya fans would like the author to continue writing this fic. Don't be so fickle-minded. Btw, it's better to write your name for everyone to know you. If you find this fic disturbing, don't read it. You're making the author feel down.

This fic is CUTE and I want the author to CONTINUE updating this fic.

Re: CUTE FIC!

[ladestiny92.livejournal.com]

Thanks for your support...^^,
I'm glad you like it...^_^
I don't mind the flame, but I want to at least know the anonymous name and why she hate it...^^,
You really think this is cute? Thanks^^
I'll try to update quickly, but with homeworks piling up, exams and my other unfinished fanfics, I don't know when I could update...^^,
Again, thank you for the sweet review...^^

[nattora.livejournal.com]

My attention was actually caught by two words - Ohno and pregnant. I totally agree with jamiesteban that this fic is unique. It's the first time I encounter with such a crazy idea! But I'm curious what will happen next, so I will wait for the updateXD. And I will check for your other fics=)

Gambare!

[ladestiny92.livejournal.com]

Thanks for the review...^^,
I'm glad you like it...^_^
At first, it felt kind of weird writing mpreg fics about characters who really do exist in..well, real life. lol^^
But after reading demonic crayons mpreg fic in arashirabu, I decided to try..lol^^,

[realm-of-ravenx.livejournal.com]

Please ignore Anonymous who obviously has no taste in good fanfiction.

I personally love this so far and hope you continue. I can't wait to see how things develop, I hope you don't keep me waiting for too long! I'm on the edge of seat already. ^_^

[ladestiny92.livejournal.com]

Of course, I will ignore anonymous..^_^
lol~ I'm glad you like it...^^
Well, next week, I have one week holiday because of Hari Raya, so after helping my mom to clean up the house, I'll use my time to write..lol
Of course, I need to study to because after holiday, there's exam...-.-'
Well, stay on your seat... I'll do my best to update super fast...^^,

[arashic0804.livejournal.com]

well i think its unique..ohno pregnant..thats awesome...XDXD...just keep it up! ignore those ppl who dont knw how to critique but want to do it..XD GAMBARE!!

[ladestiny92.livejournal.com]

Arigatou, Shida-chan...(that's your name, right? sorry if I got it wrong)^^
I'm glad you like it...^^,
Yup, I'll ignore those people...lol
Especially after reading a poem I learned at school called If by Rudyard Kipling. It's really great with all the advices...^^,
Thanks again for the review..^^

[hard2findanick.livejournal.com]

Oh hi, I thought your summary sounded unusual.I don't really read fic as much as I do write(yea weirdo...)...but when I saw Ohno and pregnant?! Interesting.
And I don't think an 'anonymous' should discourage you..It's your game here and you play it. Mistakes are there because you grow with it. Gambatte, ne?

[ladestiny92.livejournal.com]

I'm glad this fic caught your attention...^^,
haha~ We're quite the opposite, ne? This year, I don't know why, but I'm feeling a little lazy (probably because of school), so I read more fics than I write them...-.-'
Thanks for the review and support...^_^

[risuw-chan.livejournal.com]

glad that many ppl support you^^
i was really happy to found this interesting fic and there the first comment i read was the bashing from anom.
thought that you'll stop writing (^^;))

pls update this story as fast as you can XDDD

[ladestiny92.livejournal.com]

lol...I'm glad you like this fic...^^,
Don't worry, I won't stop writing because of one flame...^^,
I'll try my best to update fast...hehe^^

[hula-chan.livejournal.com]

Ohno ... pregnant.haha! xD That's the first time i've read something like that and i like it!(: it's really interesting and unique. don't understand why Anonymous had to flame this without a proper reason. but I'm glad you didn't feel put down by it.(:

Now i want to know how Nino & the other members will react when he knows Ohno's pregnant.
waits patiently for the next chapter(:

[ladestiny92.livejournal.com]

lol...I don't know why but Ohno just seems like the 'girl' in this boyxboy relationship...lol^^,
I'll try my best to update fast..^^,
Thanks for the review..^___^

[duoson.livejournal.com]

oooh~~~ohno being nervous and protective over the unborn child??? i'm gonna kick nino if he bails out ;D

[ladestiny92.livejournal.com]

Oh~ Please don't kick Nino...Ohno needs him alive...lol^^
Thanks for the review...^___^

:D

[xenophobical.livejournal.com]

If Nino aborts that kid when he fins out I will not omg!love him anymore ;A;

Don't get discouraged by Anonymous. You don't even know what he/she's talking about. Well, I don't, since he/she went from characterization and plot to insulting your English :|

Your English isn't perfect, but it's a lot better that expected from a person whose mother language isn't English :D And though there are some words that might need some rephrasing, people learn from their mistakes, right?

I want to know what happens so continue your story! It's not that often I see an interesting looking mpreg fic XD

Re: :D

[ladestiny92.livejournal.com]

lol...Thanks for reviewing.
Don't worry, I won't be discouraged...^^,
I'll try to update as fast I could...XD
Thanks again for reviewing...^^,

[nicefinalbeam.livejournal.com]

I'm not really a big fan of mpreg, but I thought maybe it could be cute or funny and decided to give your ficlet a chance. Especially because you have someone attacking you, and as a fellow Arashi and Ohmiya fan, I want to show you my support. Everyone should be able to express their love of a pairing or a fandom, right?

If someone doesn't like something, they should stop reading or give constructive advice.

Keep writing! I thought it was clear, I could understand it, and it's an interesting concept. :D

[ladestiny92.livejournal.com]

Thanks for your support...^^,
It must be pretty weird reading mpreg about humans who exist in this world (but in other part of the world)lol~~
I felt weird writing about it too...haha...but after reading demoninc crayons mpreg fic, I gave it a shot...^____^
I'm glad that it's clear... I wrote that one in just a few hours because, well, I suddenly got the urge to write and this plot has been in my mind for awhile... I guess that's why there are lots of weird phrases here and there...(well, lot of weird phrases)~~lol~~

[mirai-kazuko.livejournal.com]

Lol. The anonymous dude was funny! XD
Please ignore him/her and continue your fic, dear. ^^

Anyway, I'm sure Ohno's kid will turn out to be as adorable as he is. <3
*cough*And I'm also sure Nino's the father..*cough* and if he backs away from all the responsibilities, I'll hit him.

[ladestiny92.livejournal.com]

Thanks...^^,
Yup, the kid will be adorable...lol~~
*clear throat* You can hit Nino, but make sure he's still alive for Ohno..haha^^,
Thanks for the review...^___^

[tinahyena.livejournal.com]

this fic is cute. i've actually read a few drabbles pertaining to oh-chan pregnancies and thought they were pertty good. yes there are grammatical errors but you're just starting out. I'm sure you will get better at it.

about what the anonymous person wrote... don't listen to him/her. keep writing, it's the best way to develope your skills. this is not the worst thing i have ever read. the grammer and such in this fic is a lot better than some other ones out there.

[ladestiny92.livejournal.com]

Thanks for your review...^^,
I'm glad you think it's cute...^____^
Sure, I won't listen to anonymous...^^,

Other oh-chan pregnancy fics? Where? *pouts* I only found one in Arashirabu written by demonic crayons...^^ Can you give me the links?lol XD

[demonic-crayons.livejournal.com]

That was fantastic! ^_^
It blows my fan fiction clear out of the water :] Please continue! <3
(and ignore the rude, anti-social and frankly ridiculous opinions of a particular person. I would name names but it seems they are spineless in their accusations and post anon.)

I do NOT want to continue this argument with said person but I think this needs to be said. What 'anon' is saying is completely stupid. If everyone without PERFECT English or Grammar skills stopped writing I doubt there would be even half of the online and novel writers in the world today. This person is suggesting that because of a few MINOR mistakes you should not write! MINOR MISTAKES!(which for someone writing in a different language is impressive, the only other language i am slightly fluent in is French and I could not write such a good fanfic.)
I am still at school (Year 11 in fact) and I know many ENGLISH teenagers without half of your language and plot skills. So if only excellent writers should post then I suppose every child and every person of less then average intelligence should stop writing. Hundreds of dull, unimaginative and BADLY WRITTEN books are published everyday, yet this person spends their time posting hateful comments on the work of an AMATEUR writer. I find this quite sad.

Please do not let this person put you or ANYONE else off writing. EVERYONE has the right to post their work. After all if a child's painting is not the best in the class does the teacher rip it up? NO. Because it is their very best and what more can ANYONE ask for.


Sorry to take up comment space. People without respect really drive me crazy.


<3 KEEP WRITING <3

[ladestiny92.livejournal.com]

Hi...^^,
demonic_crayons-chan^^, Yay! You read my fic...^^,
I'm glad you like it...>///<
Ah! You're in Year 11? I'm in Year 10..^^
You know French? Wow!^^
Thank you for your review and support...^____^

[mayhemagenta.livejournal.com]

Oh I like this story already! One due to Ohmiya and two due to not over-exaggerated mpreg. \(^w^)/

Read the whole thing about the cowardly anonymous. Please completely ignore him/her. You have a right to post what you want, and not practicing your writing wont help with any grammatical errors. And he/she isn't offering so called constructive criticism at all, more like a stupid demand to stop aspiring writers from trying their best.

I'm Malaysian too! And really happy you don't write in BM, it would be weird with imbuhan and sentence structure and all. I support you 100%! Please continue writing. <3 I want to know what happens in the next installment! <333

[ladestiny92.livejournal.com]

lol~ I'm glad you like it...^^,
You know, as Malaysian, I'm really embarrassed to say this...but my Bahasa Malaysia sucks. I'm in Form 4 and for this year, I've never got an Aa for BM...-.-' (English is the only subject I could get an A) :sigh:
With Hari Raya coming, I don't know when I could update but I'll try to update fast...^____^

[kos-mos26.livejournal.com]

Hi, I'm sorry I only got around to reading this now.

First and foremost, the story was all around adorable, (Ohmiya baby kyaaaaaa~~~) And I really, really hope that you will continue! (what will Nino do/say when he finds out? XD) Ohh, I'm excited! XD

You probably want this to be over and done by now, so I'm sorry for bringing it up, but I want to show my support for you.

Your English is very, very good as it is. I've read many works by non-native English speakers, and this was great! You expressed yourself wonderfully, and your ideas came through, as anyone with half a brain could see. Regardless of what anyone says to you, or about you, always remember that this is YOUR lj, and YOUR place to write whatever comes to you, in whatever language you speak, NOT a place where you should be afraid of writing, and sharing with people, just because of a few elitist b*tches.

However, I do have a problem with your fic. It's much, much to short. Why did you stop there? Whhhyyyyyyy? ;___; How long do I have to wait to read the rest. Ugh...waiting for chapter 1 is hard ;_____; (write quickly, please?)

*hugs, and sends you heaps chocolate and Ohmiya plushies*

[ladestiny92.livejournal.com]

lol~~ Yay! Ohmiya plushies...^^,

Yeah, the proloque is short...because that day I just decided to write something and here it is...lol~~
But don't worry...^^,
Chapter 1 will be long. I usually write more than 10 pages on Microsoft Word (well, that's when I'm feeling very inspired..lol^^
But when I'm not, I usually write 6 to 7 pages...^^,
Anyway, thanks for the review...^^
I'll try to update soon...^^

[babuwabu.livejournal.com]

hehehehe it's such a cute fic! can't wait to read more ^__^